tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post2903548235441785550..comments2023-05-23T06:27:45.215-07:00Comments on Immersed in Word: balancing actKay Tracyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-30142365621582828452011-11-22T06:51:12.872-08:002011-11-22T06:51:12.872-08:00I didn't see the original but this vevision is...I didn't see the original but this vevision is very effective. Walking-the-plank, "shell" of a ship one can't return to as the wind picks-up...harrowing.Brianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12945352610103167449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-34387096606848739922011-11-21T11:02:22.837-08:002011-11-21T11:02:22.837-08:00Hi Chen-ou, I've revised my poem. Maybe you wi...Hi Chen-ou, I've revised my poem. Maybe you will like it better...<br /><br />Hope you're well,<br />KayKay Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-78357316240064684562011-11-09T13:35:39.652-08:002011-11-09T13:35:39.652-08:00I'm not sure how to make sense of this poem, e...I'm not sure how to make sense of this poem, especially of the last two lines. <br /><br />But, the emotional-psychological impact of the last two lines is strongly felt.<br /><br />Chen-ouChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com