tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post2227850597492497087..comments2023-05-23T06:27:45.215-07:00Comments on Immersed in Word: wooly whirledKay Tracyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-33233783925375261322011-02-18T18:18:48.474-08:002011-02-18T18:18:48.474-08:00Thank you, both, for commenting on my silliness. I...Thank you, both, for commenting on my silliness. I did decide to leave the ending with room for imagination.<br /><br />That's what nonsense is all about!<br />Cheers,<br />KayKay Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07204653574216344790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-57210132354589718572011-02-18T09:59:01.560-08:002011-02-18T09:59:01.560-08:00Really fun and musical, Kay. Those W's are gre...Really fun and musical, Kay. Those W's are great.Brianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12945352610103167449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6126088940278550727.post-38031099368872532012011-02-18T08:02:35.443-08:002011-02-18T08:02:35.443-08:00Kay, I'm not sure if the last three one-line s...Kay, I'm not sure if the last three one-line stanzas work effectively. <br /><br />Here is my suggested revision:<br /><br />the dream is just<br />about...to wake<br /><br />Just a thought.<br /><br />Chen-ouChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com